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Father Has Given up Smoking父亲戒菸了  

        My father used to be a heavy smoked more than 20 cigarets each day;therefore,he was the polluter wherever he mother and I tried to persuade him to give it gave it up many times but each time only for a few days or only for a few hours.
       Once he declared that he would stop smoking right away under the pressure of my mother,and he threw his cigarets into the effect of his declaration lasted only for o I found him smoking again when he thought that he was alone and no one saw the fifth day of his declaration,he smoked openly.
       Last winter he got he was well again,the doctor ordered him to give up our delight,this time he really got rid of the seems that the doctor's order is more effective than mother's scolding,my suggestion and his own declaration.