假设你是李华曾在美国 假设你是高一新生李华。月考之后,你的英语老师Ms Shen 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议
假设你是高一新生李华。月考之后,你的英语老师Ms Shen 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议
假设你是高一新生李华。月考之后,你的英语老师Ms Shen 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议

Dear Ms Shen,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is bee a global village,English is getting more and more important,so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the o main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart,and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorise new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua
试题分析:本文属于半开放性作文,是老师征求学生对自己教学的意见。只是大概给出三个方面,具体的要点要由学生自己来新增,在第一部分中要充分表示出对英语重要性的认识,把英语作文一门非常重要的学科来学习。第二部分可以具体阐述自己的学习问题,如阅读能力不强,写作不熟练,词汇有较大问题;对老师教学的建议可以从多给学生练习的方面着手。
点评:半开放性作文对考生的要求较高,要求考生自己筛选要点,合理组织要点和谋篇布局。在写作时注意使用合适的连线词和高阶的词汇句型,提高文章的层次和档次。
假设你是高一学生李华,你们的英语老师Ms.Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请按
Dear MS LI,
It's my pleasure to discuass with you .In my view ,English get more and more important in our life .It bees a basic tooll in working of western countries .I have to say always we earn more chance over others because of a higher ability in English.And we should try our best to learn English .But as a gradulate from senior high school who is short in English study ,I think I still stay a low leavel and I am willing to improve it.During my Engling studing ,I have several problem.First ,I have difficulties in remembering the new words.Second I couldn't speak English very frequently.And the last ,I should read more articals .I wii be very happy if you give me some suggesstions.
Yours
Li Hua
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假如你是大一新生李华 开学之初 你的英语老师MS LI 希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况 并征求教学建议 1 对英, (1/3)假如你是高三学生李华,开学之初,你们新换了英语老师Ms Li。她希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,...
Dear MS LI,
It's my pleasure to discuass with you .In my view ,English get more and more important in our life .It bees a basic tooll in working of western countries .I have to say always we earn more chance over others because of a higher ability in English.And we should try our best to learn English .But as a gradulate from senior high school who is short in English study ,I think I still stay a low leavel and I am willing to improve it.During my Engling studing ,I have several problem.First ,I have difficulties in remembering the new words.Second I couldn't speak English very frequently.And the last ,I should read more articals .I wii be very happy if you give me some suggesstions.
Yours
Li Hua
希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议
Dear Ms Li
I am very happy to join in this English summer camp to improve my English. As English is not only a tool to know the world, but it also brings us much fun to learn it. Frankly I have been studying it for 3 year in mid school, but I just have little vocabulary and no confidence speaking English in public. So it will be much appreciated if you can take the following 2 suggestions :1. to introduction some methods to enlarge English vocabulary.2. to give us more chance to practice oral English.Thanks for your consideration.
Best regards
Li Hua
假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初,你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学
One Possible Version:
Dear Ms Li,
I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is being a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the o main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua 这是一封英文稿件,写作内容包括五个主要要点:
1. 对英语学习的认识;(一个要点)
2. 自己目前的英语水平;(一个要点)
3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题;(一个要点)
4. 对英语教学的两点建议。(两个要点)
文章应围绕这五个要点合理展开,可使用适当的词句使文章衔接自然、层次分明。考生需要
自己做合理的联想,可根据主题对要点进行适当发挥,内容要切合实际,符合逻辑。
假设你是高三学生李华,开学之初,你们新换了英语老师Ms Li。 她希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is being a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the o main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you! 本文的内容非常简单,要点都已经列出了,考生根据自己的实际情况写出真实的情况。要注意使用高阶词汇和句型如as…随着…;同时也要使用一些合适的连词,让文章更流畅。
你的英语老师RIta希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请用英语给她写一封信。
Dear Mary:
This time I had a colourful life,let me tell you the experienced.
At the first photo,I was doing my homework already,it was difficult,but I did it to the best of my ability.The second is the park what I was playing in,the park is vary beautiful and joyful,I like it very much.The third is my hobby,I always sing when I feeled boring ,I think it could lighten my pressure.Nest,I was playing puter or watching TV,it can used up my free time.And an other thing is to playing tennis,I think it was a very good way to take exercise.
That's all of my life in photos,can you tell me what things happened in your life?
Yours,
Rose.
假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初,你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习
允许我发一下牢骚,为什么这个呆逼李华从初中就开始不会写作文,高中,大学也是
假如你是高二新生周凯,你的英语老师希望了解每位学生英语学习情况英语作文
我是一个又活泼,又调皮,又爱捣蛋的女孩。
记得那是在我小学三年级的时候,语文课上,老师认真地讲课,同学们都凝神听讲。我突发奇想——如果出现一声怪叫,会如何呢?于是我就在下面学了两声猫叫。老师听到了,厉声问道:“谁把猫带到教室里来了,”突然有人说:“老师,好像是任佳楠。”老师说:“任佳楠,是不是你把猫带来了?”我忙说:“不是,不是我。”老师继续讲课。下课了,老师说:“任佳楠,你到办公室来一趟。”我老老实实地向老师承认了错误,老师把我狠狠地训了一顿,使我认识到了在课堂上捣乱的严重后果。
我就是这样一个捣蛋鬼,但从那以后,我再也没有在课堂上犯过错误,可调皮的本性仍没有改正。
记得那年夏天,一场暴雨匆匆而来,又匆匆而去。雨过天晴,彩虹高挂。我向妈妈请求去外面趟雨水,妈妈支支吾吾地答应了。我们家的院子是用水泥抹的,积水清澈见底。我光着脚,用力踏水,笑声伴着水花四溅。一不注意,我摔倒了,弄得浑身都溼透了。我怕妈妈看见就要溜。这时妈妈出来了,她看见我狼狈的样子,不禁笑出了声。然后急忙把我拉起来,到屋里给我换衣服。
瞧,我就是这样一个调皮的女孩。妈妈常叫我疯丫头,可我早巳听惯了,并不在意。
我虽然调皮,爱捣蛋,但也有许多优点。我很活泼,不拘小,节,爱交朋友。
那是一个宁静的夜晚,我和几个小伙伴一起看星星,突然听见蟋蟀的叫声,就去找。扒开石头一看,果然有一只大蟋蟀。我猛地一扑,抓住了它。我高兴地大叫:“我捉住了,我捉住了……”回到家,妈妈说:“这丫头真厉害,什么都敢捉。”
我就是一个普普通通的学生,我的性格大家都知道了吧!但我不想改变自己,我还是我。